Sunday, January 11, 2009

One of those rare posts, with a promise to continue.

I've been awake for 3 whole days
Cuz when I close my eyes I see these things.
Nothing outside of the ordinary
But I think that's what makes it scary.

Correct me if I'm wrong
But isn't it expected
That things that don't make sense
Should probably be corrected
I don't see why the world won't just let go
Of these guilt trips and high hopes.

There was time that I would say
Don't do anything
If you feel like you might regret it.
But lately I feel that I'm advocating
Quite the opposite.

Correct me if I'm wrong
But isn't it expected
That things that don't make sense
Should probably be corrected
I don't see why the world won't just let go
Of these guilt trips and high hopes.

It's all around us,
It's all that grounds us.
But it's all lies
You're not going to live in the sky,
So promise me you'll enjoy this life.

1 comment:

Dylan said...

It was the last stanza, I was totally out of creativity hahaha...

But on a positive note, this piece was good. I don't quite get the meter of the chorus but the rest of it flows nicely.